Your best life now 2
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Good morning again Mr. [Name]!
Well, it seems like what you have mentioned has an impact on me.
Honestly speaking, I am one of the person mentioned in the book. Haha.
How come? Well, I am a person who put off my happiness for some time in the future. It seems like I cannot be fully happy and satisfied with everything since I have to focus on many things. But anyway, I am really hoping to be able to overcome it too.
Thanks for a very informative thought.
See you again tomorrow!
Always,
Kathrine ^^
He says that many people go through life with low with low self esteem, focucing on the negative feeling inferior or inadequate, always dwelling on some reason why we can\'t be happy.
>> He said that many people go through life with low self esteem, focusing on the negative feeling of inferiority or inadequacy, and always dwelling on some reasons why we can\'t be happy.
Others put off their happiness till some future date.
>> Others put off their happiness till some time in the future.
To live our best life we have to do something to change our life style.
>> correct!
What can we do to brake our negative thought?
>> correct!
First of all, We have to say good bye with our past.
>> First of all, we have to say good bye to our past.
We may have experienced adversity or trials in our past.
>> correct!
Unfortunately, We can\'t do anything about the past.
>> correct!
Now is the best time to enlarge our vision and let go of the past.
>> correct!
So, I am going to talk about how we can change our life and how we can make our life the best.
>> correct!
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