Your best life now

2015-09-30 · 첨삭 강사 Kathrine

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Today I would like to talk about my favorite book "Your best life now" I have already it several time written by Korean. This book has been translated Korean version “긍정의 힘” The Power of positive thought. Recently I finished reading the English version of this book. Reading English version of this book come to me another meaning. I was feeling like that I am talking with the author directly while Iwas am reading this book. So, I would like to share my impression. This book is written by Joel Osteen pastor and it is designated by New York Times as the best seller. It also sold over s million copies over the world. In the introduction of this book, The author said that Happy, successful, fulfilled individuals have learned how to live their best lives now, No matter where your are or what challenges you are facing, we can enjoy our life right now.

강사 첨삭

Today I would like to talk about my favorite book \"Your best life now\"
>> correct!
I have already it several time written by Korean. 

>> I have already read it several times and it was written by a Korean.

>> or: I have already read it several times written by a Korean author.
 This book has been translated Korean version “긍정의 힘” The Power of positive thought.
>> 
 This book has been translated in Korean version “긍정의 힘” The Power of positive thought.
Recently I finished reading the English version of this book.

>> correct! 

Reading English version of this book come to me another meaning.

>> Reading the English version of this book has another meaning to me.
 I was feeling like that I am talking with the author directly while Iwas am reading this book. 

>> It felt like I was directly talking with the author while reading this food.
 So, I would like to share my impression.
>> 
correct!  
This book is written by Joel Osteen pastor and it is designated by New York Times as the best seller.

>> This book is written by Joel Osteen, a pastor,  and it was designated by as a New York Times  best seller. 

It also sold over s million copies over the world.
>> Over 5 million copies have been sold all over the world.
In the introduction of this book, The author said that Happy, successful, fulfilled individuals have learned how to live their best lives now, No matter where your are or what challenges you are facing, we can enjoy our life right now.

>> In the introduction of this book, the author said that happy, successful, fulfilled individuals have learned how to live their best lives now. No matter where you are or what challenges you are facing, we can enjoy our life right now.


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