Your country is best at which sports? Why is it strong at these?
학생이 쓴 원문
The part that Korean athletes are good at is golf.
Most female golfers are at the top of the world stage.
Their concentration and hard work have been their strengths.
In addition, diligence is a characteristic of Korean players.
강사 첨삭
Hello Miss. [Name]! It\'s good to know that women in your country are stepping up to bring recognition to South Korea. Bravo!~~T.Dee
>>Korean athletes are good at playing golf.
Most female golfers are at the top of the world stage.
Most female golfers are at the top of the world stage.
>>CORRECT!
Their concentration and hard work have been their strengths.
Their concentration and hard work have been their strengths.
>>CORRECT!
In addition, diligence is a characteristic of Korean players.
In addition, diligence is a characteristic of Korean players.
>>In addition, diligence is another characteristic of Korean players.
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