your homework
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I think our country have not retirement home. But a lot of people want to go to the country so they want to born tree, flower, vegetable and fruit in the house. But I don\'t want to go because if when I older, I often have to go to hospital. But a lot of country in Korean, don\'t have the good hospital. seconds, I want to play with my friends. I think my friends want to live in downtown because we can go to the good cafe, store and restaurant.
anyway, teacher have a good night. I am an army officer so I have a lot of training in the camp. but I will trying to study very well. thank you
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1. I think our country have not retirement home.
>>I think our country does not have a retirement home.
2. But a lot of people want to go to the country so they want to born tree, flower, vegetable and fruit in the house.
>>But a lot of people want to go to the countryside so they can plant trees, flowers, vegetables and fruits outside their houses.
3. But I don\'t want to go because if when I older, I often have to go to hospital.
>>But I don\'t want to go because when I get older, I often have to go to the hospital.
4. But a lot of country in Korean, don\'t have the good hospital.
>>But a lot of countryside in Korea don\'t have good hospitals.
5. seconds, I want to play with my friends.
>>Second, I want to play with my friends.
6. I think my friends want to live in downtown because we can go to the good cafe, store and restaurant.
>>CORRECT
OR>>I think my friends want to live in downtown because we can go to some good cafe, store and restaurant.
Good answer.
Have a good night!
- T. Melody ^^
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