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1. He is a very famous athlete because he has a world record about shooting. when I was athlete, I meet his in the shooting range. He tried to high practice so I want to win his
2. He always talk about my life. he called \"my father\". you know, he always talk \"you have to all of the world\" and we went to many country. So I can have a dream
3. he has a good leadership. When I became an army officer. I don\'t know anything so I always mistake my work. But he talk \"It\'s okay because of first time and gave me a book about how to write a report for me. So I could read it and I grow-up. If he is not in the base camp, I can\'t grow-up and I always feel so bad.
강사 첨삭
1. He is a very famous athlete because he has a world record about shooting.
>>He is a very famous athlete because he has a world record in shooting.
2. when I was athlete, I meet his in the shooting range.
>>When I was an athlete, I met him in the shooting range.
3. He tried to high practice so I want to win his
>>We had a practice so I want to defeat him.
4. He always talk about my life.
>>He would always ask about my life.
5. he called \"my father\".
>>He is called \"my father\".
6. you know, he always talk \"you have to all of the world\" and we went to many country.
>>You know, he would always say \"You have to go all over the world\" and we went to many countries.
7. So I can have a dream
>>So, I can have my dream.
8. he has a good leadership.
>>He has a good leadership.
9. When I became an army officer, I don\'t know anything so I always mistake my work.
>>When I became an army officer, I didn\'t know anything so I used to always had mistakes in my work.
10. But he talk \"It\'s okay because of first time and gave me a book about how to write a report for me.
>>But he said, \"It\'s okay because it\'s only the first time.\" and he gave me a book about how to write a report.
11. So I could read it and I grow-up.
>>So, I could read it and learn from it.
12. If he is not in the base camp, I can\'t grow-up and I always feel so bad.
>>If he was not in the base camp, I couldn\'t grow up and I would always feel bad.
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