Your homework
학생이 쓴 원문
When I wan young, my family went to the ocean so we slept in the base camp.
But I only played with my older brother without parents because they had to protect our tent.
Anyway, The sky was suddenly so cloud. But we played on the beach, At that instand it’s rained in the sky. So we had to dig in the ground. It is very interesting to me. So I can remember it now!!
강사 첨삭
You sent this homework for the second time.
Please check my corrections in the first composition that you sent me. ^^
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