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2020-03-16 · 첨삭 강사 Jean

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1. congested - I like the my country because it is not congested 2. deployed - I often see the deployed people to training because I am an army officer 3. particular - this food is particular for me because I ate it very delicious when I was in another country 4. wide array - There is a wide array of gun in the base camp 5. by the day - Nowadays, I watch TV by the day

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]!

Thanks for sending your homework!

Cheers, 
Jean~~

1. congested
- I like the my country because it is not congested. 
>> correct

2. deployed
- I often see the deployed people to training because I am an army officer
>> I often see people deployed for training because I am an army officer. 

3. particular
- this food is particular for me because I ate it very delicious when I was in another country
>> I like this particular food because it was very delicious when I tried it in another country. 

4. wide array
- There is a wide array of gun in the base camp
>> There is a wide array of guns at the base camp.

5. by the day
- Nowadays, I watch TV by the day
>> Nowadays, I watch TV daily. 

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