Your house, containing everything you own, catches fire. After saving your loved ones and pets, you
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If my house catches fire, I\'ll save my cellphone. Because it has a lot of my personal information like my friends\' phone numbers and passwords of my internet account.
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OR>> If my house catches fire, I\'ll save my cellphone because it contains my personal information like my friends\' phone numbers and passwords of my internet accounts.
Therefore, if I lose my cellphone, I can\'t find them anywhere so I\'ll save my cell phone.
>> CORRECT
Other people think it\'s better to save money than cellphone.
>> Other people think it\'s better to save their money rather than a cellphone.
However, cellphone is really expensive so I think both to save cellphone or money is the same.
>> However, cellphones are really expensive so I think saving either the cellphone or the money would be equally fine.
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