Your house, containing everything you own, catches fire. After saving your loved ones and pets, you
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Hi there, pretty [이름]! Thanks for this. I\'d like to let you know that you\'re doing great in class. Just be more confident in speaking. ^^
You can tell me more about your second e-mail in class. See you this afternoon! ^_^
~T.Avery
When I was young, Sometimes I\'d thought about it.
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My answer was Money.
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But now, I learned that burnt money can be rewarded at the bank. So, I will bring out the pictures I have taken.
>> However, I came to know that burnt money can be exchanged at the bank so I will save the pictures I have taken instead.
The pictures that I took when I was young are papers. And it is not stored as a digital file.
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OR>> The pictures that I took when I was young are printed in photo papers and it is not stored as a digital file.
I always appreciate you teacher! Because My speaking level is not good, I can\'t say it during class...
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Please know my sadness and gratitude~:D
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Today, I want to ask about introduction when I send business e-mail to coordinator.
>> Today, I want to ask about my introduction when sending a business e-mail to the coordinator.
At last interview, I started my letter \"Hello, My name is~. I am so happy to study at your college as exchange student. I am looking forward to the day I go to there\"
>>During the last interview, I started my letter \"Hello, My name is~. I am so happy to study at your college as an exchange student. I am looking forward to the day I go to there.\"
If I have to send them second e-mail, would it be better fot me that skip those two sentence?
>> If I have to send them a second e-mail, would it be better for me that skip those two sentences?
Instead of that, Why don\'t I introduce myself, briefly? Like, \"Hello, My name is A. I\'m exchange student who will study at your college at next winter semester.\"
>> Instead of that, why don\'t I introduce myself, briefly? Like, \"Hello! My name is A. I\'m an exchange student who will study at your college during the next winter semester.\"
(I think it\'s better to use this second sentence for you next e-mail. ^^)
Is there any better sentence to introduce myself?
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