Your summer hydration(Apr.9)

Good afternoon, [이름]!

Thank you so much for this composition.^-^ It is very timely and I agree that in the future, we might need to buy/purchase clean oxygen in cans or bottles. I hope we can still save our planet for our children and grandchildren.

Have a good weekend!

__Teacher Mayleen :)

1. What did you learn from this article?
This article reminded me that drinking water is very important. And
>>> This article reminded me that drinking water is very important. [OMIT \'AND\']
2. How did you keep yourself hydrated?
I often drink waterat home and office.

>>> I often drink water at home and in the office.

Whenever I go outside, I try to take the water bottle.
>>> Whenever I go outside, I try to bring water with me.
3. Jacques Cousteau said:\"Water and air, the two essential fluids on which all life depends, have become global garbage cans\" What do you think of this quote?

I agree with this quote. When I was a child, I never imagined that I would buy and eat water later.

>>> I agree with this quote. When I was a child, I never imagined that I would be buying drinking water later.

But now it\'s so common to buy and eat water.

>>> Now, it\'s a common thing to buy water for consumption.

But I think the air problem is more serious than the water, because the fine dust is getting worse every year.

>>> However, I think that air pollution is more serious than water pollution because the issue about fine dust is getting worse every year.

I\'m not sure if the air is clean in Philippines.

>>> I\'m not sure if the air is clean in the Philippines.

The air is not clean in Kore due to various reasons such as the influence of yellow dust or fine dust of china, automobile exhaust and so on.

>>> The air in Korea isn\'t clean anymore due to various reasons such as yellow dust from China, automobile exhaust, and so on.

Hence, we may need to buy the clean air in the future

>>> Correct!