Your voice
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Theme: [ESSAY] Write about one cartoons or animation show/movie that you watch and talk about the lessons that children can learn from it.
My favorite animation is .
In that movie, the 16-year-old Nagisa believes in the spirit of the horse (Kotodama) that good words are hope and bad words are returned as anger.
One day, angry when a friend Gaede said mean things on his way home from school, Nagisa accidentally finds a broken radio booth in an ownerless cafe called Aquamarine and confides her innermost thoughts there.
Meanwhile, an anonymous informant who heard the story on the radio sent a letter to the narrator..
In that movie, I can learn \'We don\'t speak not good words.\'.
I really liked that movie!
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Hi there, [이름]!
Thanks for sending your homework today. I plan to look this film up on Google after my work. I\'ll let you know when I\'ve found it. See you in two days!
Cheers,
Jean~~
Theme: [ESSAY] Write about one cartoons or animation show/movie that you watch and talk about the lessons that children can learn from it.
My favorite animation is .
>> My favorite animation is Your Voice.
In that movie, the 16-year-old Nagisa believes in the spirit of the horse (Kotodama) that good words are hope and bad words are returned as anger.
>> correct~~
One day, angry when a friend Gaede said mean things on his way home from school, Nagisa accidentally finds a broken radio booth in an ownerless cafe called Aquamarine and confides her innermost thoughts there.
>> correct~~
Meanwhile, an anonymous informant who heard the story on the radio sent a letter to the narrator..
>> correct~~
In that movie, I can learn \'We don\'t speak not good words.\'.
>> In that movie, I can learn that we shouldn\'t say mean or bad things to others.
I really liked that movie!
>> correct~~
>> or: I enjoyed this movie.
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