Youth is a state of [이름]d!
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I agree that youth is a state of [이름]d.
>> CORRECT
The young can be behind the times, and the elder can be go with the times.
>> The young can be behind the times, and the elderly can go with the times.
I watched a youtube video.
>> I watched a YouTube video.
The topic of this video was meeting between teacher and student.
>> The topic of this video was a meeting between a teacher and a student.
This teacher worked about 20 years in school, and this student dropped out of school herself.
>> CORRECT
She said that she got stressed extremely at school because of studying hard, so she left school and found her career in the society.
>> She said she got extremely stressed at school because of studying hard, so she left school and found her career in society.
Before I watched this video, I was worried that the teacher would scold the student.
>> CORRECT
But in this video, this teacher respected her choice and he said that he would found the solutions about happiness of his students.
>> But in this video, this teacher respected her choice, and he said that he would find solutions for the happiness of his students.
After that, I watched another youtube video that meeting with student who would took a CSAT and the founder of CSAT.
>> After that, I watched another YouTube video that shows a meeting between a student who took CSAT and the founder of CSAT.
In this video, the founder insisted that the current CSAT has [이름]ed a lot from founding intentions, so government have to make a solutions that students don\'t have to focus only on studying.
>> In this video, the founder insisted that the current CSAT has [이름]ed a lot from its founding intentions, so the government should make solutions in order for the students to not only focus on studying.
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