Yunnori

2022-01-09 · 첨삭 강사 Elise

학생이 쓴 원문

My favorite korean traditional game is yunnori. I like yunnori because I can play it with my family on holidays. When I go to grandmother’s house on holiday, I enjoy yunnori with my relatives.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]:)

I\'ve seen that game before in a Korean drama that I\'ve watched before. It\'s very interesting I must say. :)

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My favorite korean traditional game is yunnori.
>> My favorite Korean traditional game is \"Yunnori\".

I like yunnori because I can play it with my family on holidays.
>> I like it because I usually play it wit my family during holidays.

When I go to grandmother’s house on holiday, I enjoy yunnori with my relatives.
>> When I go to grandmother’s house on a holiday, I enjoy it with my relatives.

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