Zero Waste
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Theme: [ESSAY] What\'s your thought on the zero waste lifestyle?
I think it\'s meaningful activity.
We can decrease wastes and we can slow golbal warming.
And we can practice minimalism and decrease micro plastic.
But there is one problem.
Zero-Waste products are expensive more than normal!
I think Zero-Waste shops should decrease the price.
Then, many people can practice zero waste more popular!
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Here\'s your last edited composition this week, [이름]!
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Jean~~
Theme: [ESSAY] What\'s your thought on the zero waste lifestyle?
I think it\'s meaningful activity.
>> I believe it\'s a meaningful activity.
We can decrease wastes and we can slow golbal warming.
>> We can reduce waste and slow down global warming.
And we can practice minimalism and decrease micro plastic.
>> Also, we can practice minimalism and decrease microplastics.
But there is one problem.
>> correct~~
Zero-Waste products are expensive more than normal!
>> Zero-Waste products are more expensive than normal or ordinary ones!
I think Zero-Waste shops should decrease the price.
>> I think we need more Zero-Waste shops and they should reduce or lower their prices.
Then, many people can practice zero waste more popular!
>> Then, many people can practice zero waste and it\'ll become more popular!
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