Zi ka virus
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When I heard about Zika virus. I thought that Korea is safety country from Zika.
But the reality was not. Korea already have had tree infected persons.
They were infected by Zica virus from Brazil and other Asia country.
First, I would like to talk about what is Zika.
Zika virus disease is a disease caused by the Zika virus, which is spread to people primarily through the bite of an infected mosquito.
The most common symptoms of Zika are fever, rash, joint pain, and red eyes.
People usually don't get sick enough to go to the hospital, and they very rarely die of Zika. For this reason, many people might not realize they have been infected. Zika virus infection during pregnancy can cause a serious birth defect called microcephaly, as well as other severe fetal brain defects.
Korea already suffered from MERS that has similar symptoms like ZiKa.
All part of Korea such as economy, and social were confusion.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Mr. [Name]! ^^
How\'s your day going so far?
Thank you very much sharing your opinion about Zika virus.
It is really an interesting topic.
The reason why Zika virus has spread fast is because the people who visited countries that are affected by this virus are not aware of it.
Because the symptoms of Zika virus disease are not that serious, people infected seldom seek for medical attention.
The people who are infected instantly become carriers and the moment mosquitos start biting them, the virus is now active for transmission.
I honestly think Zika is far more dangerous than Dengue and Chikungunya and only a few people realize it.
Health education is the best possible means to spread awareness and of course, we have to be very conscious with our environment.
I learned a lot from this discussion. ^^
See you again tomorrow.
~Teacher Charry
When I heard about Zika virus. I thought that Korea is safety country from Zika.
>> When I heard about the Zika virus, I thought that Korea is safe from it.
But the reality was not.
>> But the reality was that, it was not.
OR >> But the reality was that, it wasn\'t.
Korea already have had tree infected persons.
>> Korea already has three persons infected with Zika virus.
They were infected by Zica virus from Brazil and other Asia country.
>> They were infected by Zika virus when they visited Brazil and other Asian countries. First, I would like to talk about what is Zika.
>> First, I would like to discuss what Zika is.Zika virus disease is a disease caused by the Zika virus, which is spread to people primarily through the bite of an infected mosquito.>> CORRECT!
OR >> Zika virus disease is a disease caused by the Zika virus, which is passed on from one person to another through the bite of an infected mosquito.The most common symptoms of Zika are fever, rash, joint pain, and red eyes.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> The most common symptoms of this disease are fever, rash, joint pain, and red eyes.People usually don\'t get sick enough to go to the hospital, and they very rarely die of Zika.
>> People usually don\'t get sick enough to go to the hospital and people rarely die of Zika.
For this reason, many people might not realize they have been infected.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> Because of this, a lot of people don\'t realize that they are already infected by the virus.
Zika virus infection during pregnancy can cause a serious birth defect called microcephaly, as well as other severe fetal brain defects.>> Getting infected by the Zika virus during pregnancy can cause a serious birth defect called microcephaly, as well as other severe fetal brain defects.Korea already suffered from MERS that has similar symptoms like ZiKa.
>> Korea already suffered from MERS that has similar symptoms with Zika.All part of Korea such as economy, and social were confusion.
>> [DO YOU MEAN]: All aspects in Korea such as economy and social standing are in confusion nowadays.
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