zoo
학생이 쓴 원문
This zoois so big!
What animals do you see here?
I see rabbit, elephant, andgiraffe.
I also see bird.
This zoo has many animals!
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]!
Thank you for doing your homework. It\'s great to visit zoos because you can see many things.
Remember to put spaces in between your words. Also, you need to put an article before some nouns.
example:
bird- a bird
Teacher Venus^^
This zoois so big!
>>>This zoo is so big!
What animals do you see here?
>>>CORRECT
I see rabbit, elephant, andgiraffe.
>>>I see a rabbit, an elephant, and a giraffe.
I also see bird.
>>>I also see a bird.
This zoo has many animals!
>>>CORRECT
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