Zoo is fun!{1/15}
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My best zoo experience is seeing Otter.
I think Otter the best animal.
Because Otter was cute! soo~ cute!
I like seeing Otter playing with the ball. > - <
I like giraffe too.
It was tall!
I like tall!
I like going to zoo!!!!
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Hello, [이름]!^^
Thank you for sending your homework. Happy mid-week!
Cheers!
Jean
My best zoo experience is seeing Otter.
>> My best zoo experience is seeing an otter.
I think Otter the best animal. Because Otter was cute! soo~ cute!
>> I think otters are the best animal in the world because they are so cute.
I like seeing Otter playing with the ball. > - <
>> I like seeing otters playing with the ball. > - <
I like giraffe too.
>> I like giraffes too.
It was tall!
>> They are tall!
I like tall!
>> I them because they are tall.
I like going to zoo!!!!
>> I like going to the zoo!!!!
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