Zumba
학생이 쓴 원문
What a wonderfy autumn!
Recently I have been learning zumba dance.
I am the most beginner in my group, bit it doesn\'t matter I dance happily.
Usually I don\'t listen Latin and dance music because it is too noisy.
Wumber teacher is very energetic and fashionable.
She makes me concenttated in zumber.
I enjoy zumba not a sexy dance but an exercise like sport.
강사 첨삭
Hello Ms. [이름]!
wow, I do love Zumba! I used to do that thrice a week before the pandemic. It\'s fun because you get to dance with someone even if you are not a good dancer. ^^ what matters most, this activity helps us lose weight while having a good time.
Talk to you later :)
Aki~
What a wonderfy autumn!
>>> What a wonderful autumn.
Recently I have been learning Zumba dance.
>>> CORRECT!
I am the most beginner in my group, but it doesn\'t matter I dance happily.
>>> CORRECT!
Usually, I don\'t listen Latin and dance music because it is too noisy.
>>> Usually, I don\'t listen to Latin and dance music because it is too noisy.
Wumber teacher is very energetic and fashionable.
>>> Zumba dance teacher is very energetic and fashionable.
She makes me concenttated in zumber.
>>> She makes me concentrate on Zumba.
I enjoy zumba not a sexy dance but an exercise like sport.
>>> I enjoy Zumba not as a sexy dance but as an exercise like a sport.
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