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학생이 쓴 원문
hello~shanee
I'm soso.
Because My father said "You go to your room and very study hard"
Ah! ver very said.
when you was 16 years old student you listen it.
I think, All students listened it.
It very sad reality.
bye bye
강사 첨삭
Hi there my dear Sharon!
Hey, cheer up!
Your father is just saying that for your own good.
So don\'t be sad, okay? I know it\'s hard to be a student because I\'ve been into that situation before.
Just do what your parents are saying because it\'s for your future.
Relax and enjoy your weekend! See you on Monday!
~Teacher Shanee
hello~shanee
>>Hello Shanee!I\'m soso.
>>Correct! (so so)OR:
>>I feel so so.Because My father said \"You go to your room and very study hard\"
>>It\'s because my father said, \" you go to your room and study hard\".
OR:
>>It\'s because my father told me to go to my room and study hard.Ah! ver very said.
>>Ah! I\'m very sad.when you was 16 years old student you listen it.
>>If you are 16 years old, you often hear this.
OR:
>>This is a common situation for 16 year old high schoolers.I think, All students listened it.
>>I think all students hear this.It very sad reality.
>>It\'s a very sad reality.bye bye
>>OR: Bye bye!
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