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2014-05-16 · 첨삭 강사 Shanee

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Hello, shanee. I'm fine because i went to my teaches she was my teacher. But I don't have anything. so my teacher say. why did you have anything?" so I say 'have my mind' It's very fun. It'very fun Ah! other her students will go the school on tomorrow. Today is teacher'day. bye.

강사 첨삭

Happy Friday Sharon! It\'s good to hear that you had fun yesterday! It\'s also good that you had the initiative to visit your teacher. I hope that you greeted all your teachers yesterday because that\'s the proper thing to do.   See you in class my dear!   ~Teacher Shanee   Hello, shanee. >>Hello Shanee!I\'m fine because i went to my teaches she was my teacher. >>I\'m fine because I went to my teacher.But I don\'t have anything. >>But I didn\'t bring anything. so my teacher say. why did you have anything?\" so I say \'have my mind\' >>So my teacher said, \"Why didn\'t you bring anything?\". I said, I have it in my mind.It\'s very fun. >>Correct! It\'very fun Ah! >>Correct! Or: >>Ah! It\'s really full of fun! other her students will go the school on tomorrow. >>Her other students will go to school tomorrow. Today is teacher\'day. bye. >>Correct! OR: >>Today is Teachers\' Day. Bye!

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