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2011-10-07 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

학생이 쓴 원문

Originally I should go to school today. But today is a date that my school was built. So, to celebrate that date, my school has a rest today, so I don't have to go to school today.

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Hi [이름], I hope you enjoyed your day today. Do not stop from learning English ok. Because this would help you a lot. Just believe in yourself and follow your dreams. T.Kelly   Here are my corrections for you: Originally I should go to school today. >>CORRECT or you can also say, Basically I am going to school today. But today is a date that my school was built. >>But today is the foundation day of my school. So to celebrate that date, my school has a rest today, >>So in celebration of my schools foundation day, we do not have a class today. So I dont have to go to school. >>CORRECT        

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