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Originally I should go to school today. But today is a date that my school was built. So, to celebrate that date, my school has a rest today, so I don't have to go to school today.
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Hi [이름],
I hope you enjoyed your day today.
Do not stop from learning English ok.
Because this would help you a lot.
Just believe in yourself and follow your dreams.
T.Kelly
Here are my corrections for you:
Originally I should go to school today.
>>CORRECT or you can also say, Basically I am going to school today.
But today is a date that my school was built.
>>But today is the foundation day of my school.
So to celebrate that date, my school has a rest today,
>>So in celebration of my schools foundation day, we do not have a class today.
So I dont have to go to school.
>>CORRECT
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