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President LEE MYNG BAK announced that if Chonanham subma-rine happening is occured by north korea,other country will isolate north korea on purpose of threating without weapons.
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President LEE MYNG BAK announced that if Chonanham subma-rine happening is occured by north korea,other country will isolate north korea on purpose of threating without weapons.
President Lee, Myoung-Bak has announced that if North Korea has something to do with the Cheon-an submarine incident, other countries will isolate North Korea because of their threatening gestures.
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President Lee was quoted saying 밢nce facts has proven that North Korea has something to do with the Chunan ship sinking, Countries around the world will agree on a suction against the North
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