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Nothing is more important to a country’s future than education. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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yes, i agree that education is important to a country\'s future truely.

>>>Yes, I agree that education is important to a country\'s future.

 Since the termination of the war,the Korea war, Our ancestor tried to develop a economy of a country.
>>>Since the termination of the Korean war, our ancestors tried to develop the economy of our country.

They thought that education is one way of developing a economy.

>>>They thought that education is one way of developing the economy.

a coulpe of year from that day, economy of korea have grown rapidly.

>>>A coulpe of year from that day, the economy of Korea has grown rapidly.

i think that it is to edcation that korea\'s economy have been developing.

>>>I think it is because of education that Korea\'s economy has been developing.

That is to say, it is within bounds to say that education is necessary to a country\'s future.

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