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2016-05-31 · 첨삭 강사 Chloe

학생이 쓴 원문

iam very busy at work. yes.i can hear you. i saw the textbook online. I can not read because I am still outside. I work as a volunteer for the goverment. I go to work at nine o'clock. I finish work at four o'clock. I give money to them. I love comedy movies. Do you know the movie? Yes, I like fruits. pardon me,please?

강사 첨삭

Hello, [이름]! I think these are the corrections I have given you yesterday. Please take time to study them when you are free. Don\'t worry because I am here to help you. So, just ask questions when you don\'t understand something. Anyway, enjoy the rest of your day, dear. I will talk with you again later. ~Teacher Chloe iam very busy at work.>>I am very busy at work. yes.i can hear you.>>Yes, I can hear you. i saw the textbook online.>>I saw the textbook online.I can not read because I am still outside.>>I cannot read because I am still outside. I work as a volunteer for the goverment.>>I work as a volunteer for the government. I go to work at nine o\'clock.>>Correct! I finish work at four o\'clock.>>Correct! I give money to them. >>Correct! I love comedy movies.>>Correct! Do you know the movie?>>Correct! Yes, I like fruits. >>Correct! pardon me,please? >>Pardon me, please? (Use more polite expressions)

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