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To. My teacher
Hi~ when I wrote a letter everyday, I am proud of myself.
Ah! I saw your letter at 11:30 so I will tell about drama to you.
umm... when I wrote a letter I sometimes forgot a capital letter.
My friend makes a boy friend, they became towdays.
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Do you have a boy friend????????
Ha!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
good night
From. sharon
강사 첨삭
Hi there Sharon!
Thanks for sending me another letter. I\'m really glad!
You should be proud of yourself because you are doing a great job.
Keep on writing compositions because that can help you improve your writing skills.
Just don\'t forget to capitalize the beginning of names and sentences.
Anyway, I don\'t have a boyfriend Sharon. As I\'ve told you, I really enjoy my freedom that\'s why.
Talk to you again tomorrow in class!
~Teacher Shanee
To. My teacher
Hi~ when I wrote a letter everyday, I am proud of myself.>>Hi! Whenever I write a letter, I feel proud of myself.
Ah! I saw your letter at 11:30 so I will tell about drama to you.
>>Ah! I saw your respnse to my letter at 11:30 so I will tell you something about a drama.umm... when I wrote a letter I sometimes forgot a capital letter.
>>Uhmm...When I write a letter, sometimes I forget to use capital letters.My friend makes a boy friend, they became towdays.
>>My friend already has a boyfriend. They are in a relationship for two days now.
Do you have a boy friend????????
>>Correct! (boyfriend)Ha!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
>>Correct!good night
>>Good night!From. sharon
>>From: Sharon
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