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What do you think it takes to be a good teacher?
I think responsibility is very need to be a good teacher.
The responsibility contains that not giving up a low level students, making a method to make a good relationship among my students.
And empathy ability is very need to be a good teacher.
I could talk with my students if I had a trust from my students.
Before I talk with my students, I had to get a trust by sympathize their minds.
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I always hear good answers from you, Ku [이름]! Impressive! I know you have become a better version of yourself.-Faith-
What do you think it takes to be a good teacher?>> CORRECT
I think responsibility is very need to be a good teacher.
>> I think being responsible is needed to be a good teacher.
The responsibility contains that not giving up a low level students, making a method to make a good relationship among my students.
The responsibility contains that not giving up a low level students, making a method to make a good relationship among my students.
>> The responsibility of a good teacher includes not giving up on low-level students and making a method to make a good relationship with my students.
And empathy ability is very need to be a good teacher.
And empathy ability is very need to be a good teacher.
>> Furthermore, empathy is needed to be a good teacher.
I could talk with my students if I had a trust from my students.
I could talk with my students if I had a trust from my students.
>> I can talk with my students if I develop their trust.
Before I talk with my students, I had to get a trust by sympathize their minds.
Before I talk with my students, I had to get a trust by sympathize their minds.
>> Before I talk with my students, I have to get their trust by sympathizing with them.
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