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2023-12-22 · 첨삭 강사 Faith

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Should we allow students to use the internet in class? Why or why not? We should allow student\'s internet using. Because we have to teach a method that they live with AI to get a good information. But we have to make a rule of using internet. For example, \'students can use a internet when they need to search for information related learning materials. If we make a rule, we will do many things with internet happily.

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Hi, Ku [이름]! Your answer is clear and understandable. Let us hope that it will be more beneficial.-Faith-
Should we allow students to use the internet in class? Why or why not?
>> CORRECT
We should allow student\'s internet using. 
Because we have to teach a method that they live with AI to get a good information.
>> We should allow students to use the internet because we have to teach them a method that they should live with AIs to get good information.
But we have to make a rule of using internet.
>> However, we have to make rules of using the internet.
OR Nonetheless, we have to create rules of the internet use in class.
For example, \'students can use a internet when they need to search for information related learning materials.
>> For example, students can use the internet when they need to search for information related to learning materials.
If we make a rule, we will do many things with internet happily.
>> If we make a rule, we will do many things with the internet happily.

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