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A fantastic day to you MS. JULIA~!^^ Thanks for writing your first essay. You have effectively presented your ideas it an effective way Keep it up!
>>> TEACHER GEMMA
>>> TEACHER GEMMA
Keeping pets is good for children.
>>> CORRECT~!^^
OR>> Petting is good for children.
For example it gives children comfortable feeling.
>>>For example, it provides children with a sense of comfort.
I see only one child family living with pet.
>>> CORRECT~!^^
But I think keeping pet is dangerous.
>>> CORRECT~!^^
And pet could bite the children.
>>> CORRECT~!^^
It might happen an allergy to children.
>>> It may cause them to have allergies too.
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