숙제
학생이 쓴 원문
I like friend hair touch. so hair study and school so became hairdresser
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름] [이름], I read your homework, and it made me smile. I can see how a small moment, like your friend touching your hair, became something meaningful to you. It’s really beautiful how that simple experience led you to follow your passion and become a hairdresser. Just a small reminder to always check your grammar, punctuation, and sentence structure when writing. It helps your message come through more clearly and makes your thoughts easier to understand. You’re doing well, and I can see your effort. Thank you for sharing something so personal. I’m glad of how you expressed yourself. Keep writing from the heart.
~ T. Lia
I like friend hair touch.
>> I like when my friend touches my hair.
so hair study and school
>> So I studied hair and went to school for it.
so became hairdresser
>> That’s why I became a hairdresser.
파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.