숙제
학생이 쓴 원문
It is a my hometown
There is changwon
Famous is big cafes
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름] [이름]. You did well giving short information about your hometown. Your sentences show what you want to say, and with just a few small changes they become clear and natural. Keep practicing writing about places and things you know. It helps you build confidence and learn how to express ideas better in English. I will keep helping you step by step.
~ T. Lia
It is a my hometown
>> It is my hometown.
There is changwon
>> It is in Changwon.
Famous is big cafes
>> It is famous for its big cafes.
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