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PlayingTchoukball makes me exciting.
So I like playing Tchoukball very much.
Also,playing sports and playing ukulele
make me exciting.
So, I usually play ukulele and sports
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Good evening, Su [이름]! ^-^
It\'s my first time encountering the word \'Tchoukball.\' Now I know it\'s an indoor team sport developed in Switzerland. Thank you for introducing it to me.
I think you\'re quite talented. You play several sports, and you are also musically inclined. I hope you\'ll be able to balance your time well without sacrificing your studies.
Thank you for answering your homework. Have a good night!
__T. Mayleen :)
PlayingTchoukball makes me exciting.
>>> Playing Tchoukball makes me excited.
So I like playing Tchoukball very much.
>>> CORRECT
Also,playing sports and playing ukulele make me exciting.
Also,playing sports and playing ukulele make me exciting.
>>> Also, playing sports and playing the ukulele make me excited.
So, I usually play ukulele and sports
So, I usually play ukulele and sports
>>> In conclusion, I usually play ukulele and sports.
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