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My favorite heroin is Asha
in Wish. This movie is my favorite
movie.She always make a wish.
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Good evening, Su [이름]!^^
I think I also watched Wish when it was released.
People make wishes because it offers them hope, and hope may be a powerful motivator, resulting in a greater desire to combat illness, conquer obstacles, and discover joy.
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My favorite heroin is Asha in Wish.
>>> My favorite heroine is Asha in Wish.
This movie is my favorite movie.
>>> This is my favorite movie.
>>> OR: This movie is my favorite.
She always make a wish.
>>> She always makes a wish.
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