숙제
학생이 쓴 원문
1. There will be --a little__ rain this week.
2. _A few_friends are coming over tonight.
3. I need _a little_ sleep.
4. Could you buy _a few_ bottles of water for me?
5. My parents give me _a little_ pocket money every week.
I believe we will be a good friend.
I was surprised to hear that you asked me about my husband.
Because I have never been talked about him(may be incorrect-_-)
We just clicked.
I have a lot of episodes to tell you.
"Expect that! Comming soon~"
Just kidding.
Have a nice weekend!
강사 첨삭
Hello again to you Ms. [Name]!^_^
I think it is really personal for you to talk about your husband and your life story but what are friends for?^_^ I would be very open to listen to your stories. It will be good to talk about your experiences because I will learn a lot from it. I will have a wonderful weekend I think because the weather will be very good. I hope you will have a happy weekend too. Kudos to your answers! Perfect! I think I will really expect more from you. I will see you on Monday. Thank you for sending your composition.
-----T. Leny-----
Here are my corrections for you:
1. There will be --a little__ rain this week.
>>>Correct!2. _A few_friends are coming over tonight.>>>Correct!
3. I need _a little_ sleep.>>>Correct!
4. Could you buy _a few_ bottles of water for me?
>>>Correct!5. My parents give me _a little_ pocket money every week. >>>Correct!I believe we will be a good friend.>>>I believe we will be good friends.
***Disregard the article \"a\" here because the subject \"we\" is plural.***
I was surprised to hear that you asked me about my husband.
>>>Correct!
>>>I was surprised when you asked me about my husband.Because I have never been talked about him(may be incorrect-_-)
>>>Because I never talked about him.We just clicked.
>>>Correct!I have a lot of episodes to tell you.>>>Correct!
>>>I have a lot of things to tell you about our married life.
\"Expect that! Comming soon~\"
>>>Expect that I will tell you more as soon as possible.Just kidding.
>>>Correct!
>>>I am just kidding.Have a nice weekend!
>>>Correct!
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