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2012-07-06 · 첨삭 강사 Grace

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1. There will be --a little__ rain this week. 2. _A few_friends are coming over tonight. 3. I need _a little_ sleep. 4. Could you buy _a few_ bottles of water for me? 5. My parents give me _a little_ pocket money every week. I believe we will be a good friend. I was surprised to hear that you asked me about my husband. Because I have never been talked about him(may be incorrect-_-) We just clicked. I have a lot of episodes to tell you. "Expect that! Comming soon~" Just kidding. Have a nice weekend!

강사 첨삭

Hello again to you Ms. [Name]!^_^ I think it is really personal for you to talk about your husband and your life story but what are friends for?^_^ I would be very open to listen to your stories. It will be good to talk about your experiences because I will learn a lot from it. I will have a wonderful weekend I think because the weather will be very good. I hope you will have a happy weekend too. Kudos to your answers! Perfect! I think I will really expect more from you. I will see you on Monday. Thank you for sending your composition. -----T. Leny-----  Here are my corrections for you: 1. There will be --a little__ rain this week. >>>Correct!2. _A few_friends are coming over tonight.>>>Correct! 3. I need _a little_ sleep.>>>Correct! 4. Could you buy _a few_ bottles of water for me? >>>Correct!5. My parents give me _a little_ pocket money every week. >>>Correct!I believe we will be a good friend.>>>I believe we will be good friends. ***Disregard the article \"a\" here because the subject \"we\" is plural.*** I was surprised to hear that you asked me about my husband. >>>Correct! >>>I was surprised when you asked me about my husband.Because I have never been talked about him(may be incorrect-_-) >>>Because I never talked about him.We just clicked. >>>Correct!I have a lot of episodes to tell you.>>>Correct! >>>I have a lot of things to tell you about our married life. \"Expect that! Comming soon~\" >>>Expect that I will tell you more as soon as possible.Just kidding. >>>Correct! >>>I am just kidding.Have a nice weekend! >>>Correct!

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