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On saturday....
I got up late and ate a sandwich with milk and noodles for brunch.
After brunch,,,
I went pick up english class, Mandarin class and english reading class
for my son in the afternoon.
I followed my son around all day. And then
We went home.
We watched movie downloaded at home.
The movie title is Train to Busan and Korean is movie and zombie is movies .
The movie is watch children aged 12 and above in theater.[12 rating]
My son is 9 years old.
My son want to see a Train to Busna so I was download.
We watched it together.
This movie was very scary, terrible but impressive.
강사 첨삭
Happy Monday, Yasmine!
Thank you for sharing about your day!
I hope that we can talk about the movie in our class.
You did a good job today! Keep it up!!
Teacher Carmen ^^
On saturday....
>> Last Saturday,...I got up late and ate a sandwich with milk and noodles for brunch.
>> Correct!After brunch,,,>> After brunch,...I went pick up english class, Mandarin class and english reading class for my son in the afternoon.
>> I went to my English and Mandarin class. My son also had his English reading class in the afternoon.I followed my son around all day. And then>> I followed my son all day.We went home.
>> Correct!We watched movie downloaded at home.
>> We watched the movie that I dowloaded at home.The movie title is Train to Busan and Korean is movie and zombie is movies .
>> The title of the movie is \"Train to Busan\" and it is a Korean horror movie.The movie is watch children aged 12 and above in theater.[12 rating]
>> Children who are 12 years old and below aren\'t allowed to watch it.My son is 9 years old.
>> Correct!My son want to see a Train to Busna so I was download.>> My son wants to watch \"Train to Busan\" so I downloaded it.We watched it together.
>> Correct!This movie was very scary, terrible but impressive.
>> This movie was very scary but it is impressive.
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