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2016-11-02 · 첨삭 강사 Carmen

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I went to Singapore last August with my friends and her son's. We went to Universal Studios. We rode transfermer, Jurassic Park, Shrek(4D), Madagascar and roller coaster... Best of best is transfermer. We didn't ride a Luge because don't have enought time. Next Day We was sightseeing in famous place. We looked Garden by the bay, Merlion Park, Laser Show..... The prices were high in Singapore but We had a great time and eating delicious food.

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Happy hump day, Yasmine! ^^   Thank you for sharing!!! You made it through half of the week! You can do it! It\'s almost Friday!!!!! See you!!! :)   Teacher Carmen ^^   I went to Singapore last August with my friends and her son\'s. >> I went to Singapore with my friend and her son last August.We went to Universal Studios. >> Correct!We rode transfermer, Jurassic Park, Shrek(4D), Madagascar and roller coaster... >> We rode rides which are Transformer, Jurassic Park, Shrek (4D), Madagascar and roller coaster.Best of best is transfermer. >> The best ride was the Transformer.We didn\'t ride a Luge because don\'t have enought time.>> We didn\'t ride the Luge because we didn\'t have enough time.Next Day  We was sightseeing in famous place. >> We went sight seeing in famous places the next day.We looked Garden by the bay, Merlion Park, Laser Show.....>> We saw the Garden by the Bay, Merlion Park and Laser Show.The prices were high in Singapore but  We had a great time and eating delicious food. >> The cost of living in Singapore is very high but we had a great time and we ate delicious food.  

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