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2016-11-07 · 첨삭 강사 Carmen

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Vietnam 1. cost low 2. I enjoyed a Sand Dune Tour by jeep in MuiNe, It was execiting and amazing. I rode a sleeping bus from Hochimin to MuiNe. It took about 5 hours for a long time. I toured Mekong River by ferry boat and It looked like Jungle in Amazon River. I saw and experienced Vietnam tradition song and cloths. There are so many motorcycle and Many motocycle are crowded in street. 3. Vietnam Rice Noodles was very delicious. Singapore 1. cost high 2. I rode a transformers in Universal Studio. It was very interesting and felt thrilled I was like a scence out of a movie of transformers. Night view was also fantastic. 3. The Chilli Crab was really delicious.

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Happy Monday, Yasmine! ^^   Thank you for sharing stories! I really appreciate it. Please check the corrections that I have for you. See you!!! :)   Teacher Carmen ^^   Vietnam1. cost low >> 1. low cost2. I enjoyed a Sand Dune Tour by jeep in MuiNe,>> I enjoyed the Sand Dune Tour in Muine. It was execiting and amazing. >> It was exciting and amazing.I rode a sleeping bus from Hochimin to MuiNe. >> I rode a bus from Hochimin to Muine.It took about 5 hours for a long time.>> It took 5 hours.I toured Mekong River by ferry boat and It looked like Jungle in Amazon River. >> I went on a tour in Mekong River by a ferry boat and it looked like the jungle in the Amazon River.I saw and experienced Vietnam tradition song and cloths. >> I saw Vietnamese traditional clothes and I also heard some Vietnamese songs.There are so many motorcycle and Many motocycle are crowded in street.>> There are many motorcyles along the crowded streets of Vietnam.3. Vietnam Rice Noodles was very delicious.>> Vietnamese rice noodles were very delicious. Singapore1. cost high >> 1. High cost2. I rode a transformers in Universal Studio. >> I rode the Transformers ride in Universal Studios.It was very interesting and felt thrilled >> It was very interesting and I felt thrilled.I was like a scence out of a movie of transformers.>> I like the movie.Night view was also fantastic.>> The scenic view at night was also fantastic.3. The Chilli Crab was really delicious. >> The chilli crab was really delicious.  

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