영작 교정 신청합니다. 오늘 안으로 해주셨으면 해요^^
학생이 쓴 원문
Also I get a friend in department of korean language education and club. Deprtment korean language education constitutes 32 people. It is smaller than other department. So we have intimacy each other. Because of this, we toured campus together beween the class and class. Also we eat luch together. Through the club, I meet many people who are interested in education.
I am sure that I will learn about education through major and club and I get true friends. So my campus life will be meaningful and valuable memory
영작 교정 신청합니다. 내일 까지 내야하는 과제라서요 오늘 안으로 해주셨으면 해요^^
부탁드립니다.
강사 첨삭
You are hanging out with the right people. Having good people who can influence you in a good way is great. I\'m glad that you\'re enjoying studying. Keep havng fun while learning.
T. Ali
Here are my corrections:
Also I get a friend in department of korean language education and club.
>>I also met a friend in the Department of Korean Language Education and club.
Deprtment korean language education constitutes 32 people.
>>The Department of Korean Language Education constitutes 32 people.
It is smaller than other department.
>>It is smaller than other departments.
So we have intimacy each other.
>>So we know each other well.
>>So we are intimate with each other.
Because of this, we toured campus together beween the class and class.
>>Because of this, we toured the campus together in between classes.
Also we eat luch together.
>>We also eat lunch together.
Through the club, I meet many people who are interested in education.
>>Correct!I am sure that I will learn about education through major and club and I get true friends.
>>I am sure that I will learn more about education through my major and club and I get to have true friends too.
So my campus life will be meaningful and valuable memory>>So my campus life will be meaningful and memorable.영작 교정 신청합니다. 내일 까지 내야하는 과제라
파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.