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How did you meet Jin Wook? (your best friend)
- when i was first grade in school, we are a same class. so we can a make something special. we are most like same to other. and favorite is same too!! And i studied like him. Well, just we have very closely
But now is not a same class. however we met sometimes.
Tell me more about your hometown.
- we are home town is a Really home town like a country.
if teacher want a search, ENTER the Nonsan
What is your favorite animal/color/fruit etc.
My favorite animal is cow and grean and apple^^
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Hello [이름]!
You did a fantastic job on your composition! I'l give you my answers too. I have a bestfriend too. He is a guy, and wevmet when we were in elementary school. My hometown is a busy city and it is the coldest city in the Philippines. I hope you can visit our hometown someday. :) I like all animals except reptiles like snakes, and crocodiles. I like the color green too! My favorite fruit is manggo. ^^
-t. Karla
How did you meet Jin Wook? (your best friend)
>>How did you meet your best friend Jin Wook?- when i was first grade in school, we are a same class.
>>When I was in first grade. We were in the same class.
so we can a make something special.
>>So we can make something special.
we are most like same to other.
>>We are so much alike.
and favorite is same too!!
>>And we have the same favorites too!
And i studied like him.
>>I studied just like him.
Well, just we have very closely>>Well, we are very close.
But now is not a same class. >>But now, were not on the same class. however we met sometimes.
>>However, we still meet sometimes.
Tell me more about your hometown.>>Correct!
- we are home town is a Really home town like a country.
>>My hometown is like the country side.if teacher want a search, ENTER the Nonsan>>If teacher wants to know where it is, just go to Nonsan.What is your favorite animal/color/fruit etc.
>>What is your favorite animal/color/ fruit etc. ?My favorite animal is cow and grean and apple^^
>>My favorite animal is cow, my favorite color is green and my favorite fruit is green apple.
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