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2011-08-26 · 첨삭 강사 Karla

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How did you meet Jin Wook? (your best friend) - when i was first grade in school, we are a same class. so we can a make something special. we are most like same to other. and favorite is same too!! And i studied like him. Well, just we have very closely But now is not a same class. however we met sometimes. Tell me more about your hometown. - we are home town is a Really home town like a country. if teacher want a search, ENTER the Nonsan What is your favorite animal/color/fruit etc. My favorite animal is cow and grean and apple^^

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Hello [이름]! You did a fantastic job on your composition! I'l give you my answers too. I have a bestfriend too. He is a guy, and wevmet when we were in elementary school. My hometown is a busy city and it is the coldest city in the Philippines. I hope you can visit our hometown someday. :) I like all animals except reptiles like snakes, and crocodiles. I like the color green too! My favorite fruit is manggo. ^^ -t. Karla How did you meet Jin Wook? (your best friend) >>How did you meet your best friend Jin Wook?- when i was first grade in school, we are a same class. >>When I was in first grade. We were in the same class. so we can a make something special. >>So we can make something special. we are most like same to other. >>We are so much alike. and favorite is same too!! >>And we have the same favorites too! And i studied like him. >>I studied just like him.  Well, just we have very closely>>Well, we are very close. But now is not a same class. >>But now, were not on the same class. however we met sometimes. >>However, we still meet sometimes. Tell me more about your hometown.>>Correct! - we are home town is a Really home town like a country. >>My hometown is like the country side.if teacher want a search, ENTER the Nonsan>>If teacher wants to know where it is, just go to Nonsan.What is your favorite animal/color/fruit etc. >>What is your favorite animal/color/ fruit etc. ?My favorite animal is cow and grean and apple^^ >>My favorite animal is cow, my favorite color is green and my favorite fruit is green apple.

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