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2015-02-02 · 첨삭 강사 Marie

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Imagine a foreigner is asking you for directions (think about a particular place or area, like a mall, a theater or a school). Give directions to get from one point to another. Explain what landmarks he or she might see along the way. Actually, we can often meet to foreigners in Seoul. There are so many foreigners for trip in there. They are often question to me how to go to the Gwanghwamun Plaza. It's easy to find out Gwanghwamun Plaza. If you can go Gwanghwamun subway station, you can see easily statue of King Sejong. Moreover, actually many people are walking to there.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! I bet you\'ve met so many foreigners in Seoul! It must be a bit exhilarating for you to answer the same questions again and again. Haha! But then again, it\'s good practice, right? You did a good job here! Keep it up! Please check my corrections below. Ciao! ~Teacher Marie~ Actually, we can often meet to foreigners in Seoul. >> Actually, we can often meet foreigners in Seoul. OR >> Actually, we usually see foreigners in Seoul.There are so many foreigners for trip in there. >> There are so many foreigners going on a trip around the city.They are often question to me how to go to the Gwanghwamun Plaza. >> They often ask me how to get to the Gwanghamun Plaza.It\'s easy to find out Gwanghwamun Plaza. >> CORRECT! >> find out = findIf you can go Gwanghwamun subway station, you can see easily statue of King Sejong. >> If you go to the Gwanghamun subway station, you can easily see the the statue of King Sejong.Moreover, actually many people are walking to there. >> Moreover, many people are walking towards that area. OR >> Actually, you can see many people walking around that area.  

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