[[이름] essay]

I prefer to live in a big city. I was born in a small city of Korea. When I was young, I did't see the big buildings and a gallery. I was moved to big city when I was middle school student. There was a lot of high buildings and cultural museum and gallery. It was amazing for me. Actually, we can have so many cultural benefit in big city like Seoul. So, I think the life in the city is good for me.

Hi there [이름]! We are the exact opposite! I was born in a small city, but I grew up in a big city. So all my life I was a city girl, but now I returned to my hometown. :) I guess living in a big city is better for you since you were sort of a country bumpkin since you were young. ^^ Thanks for sharing this. I had fun reading your composition. Take note of the articles in your sentences and the subject-verb agreement. :) Please review my corrections here. Ciao! ~Teacher Marie~ I prefer to live in a big city. >> CORRECT! I was born in a small city of Korea. >> CORRECT! >> of = inWhen I was young, I did\'t see the big buildings and a gallery. >> When I was young, I didn\'t see big buildings and galleries. I was moved to big city when I was middle school student. >> I moved to a big city when I was a middle school student. There was a lot of high buildings and cultural museum and gallery. >> There were a lot of high buildings, cultural museums and galleries. It was amazing for me. >> CORRECT! Actually, we can have so many cultural benefit in big city like Seoul. >> Actually, we can have so many cultural benefits in a big city like Seoul. So, I think the life in the city is good for me. >> CORRECT! OR >> So I think life in the city is better for me.