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I agree with the quotation partially. But, sometimes luck changes many things in our life. For example, sometimes I got the higher than I expected when I was high school student. That was good luck. These situations are occurred often in our ordinary day. However, we always have to effort hard because luck is not always follow us.

Hello [이름]! I have to agree with what you said here. Luck is not always on our side. Sometimes we would have a series of unfortunate events that would make us feel like we already ran out of luck. And then the next day, we are back to being lucky. It\'s strange how life works. Haha! Thanks for sharing your thoughts on this. Please review my corrections below. Ciao! ~Teacher Marie~ I agree with the quotation partially. >> I slightly agree with the quote. But, sometimes luck changes many things in our life. >> CORRECT! OR >> But, sometimes, luck changes many things in our life.For example, sometimes I got the higher than I expected when I was high school student. >> For example, I would sometimes get a higher score than what I expected when I was a high school student. That was good luck. >> CORRECT!These situations are occurred often in our ordinary day. >> These situations would often occur in our everyday life. However, we always have to effort hard because luck is not always follow us. >> However, we always have to exert effort because we are not always lucky.