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I prefer to eat home-made food at anywhere. I'm eating twice per day at the restaurants, so I bored to eating that food. As you know, foods at the restaurants have a lot of relish. Many kind of relish have a negative effect on our health. Nowadays, I have a lunch box made from home once per day. It is really good to me. My favorite home-made food is kimchi soup with sausage made by my mother.

Hello [이름]! I love my mom\'s cooking too! I can\'t say she\'s the best cook in the world, but she does like to experiment and create delicious dishes every now and then. Thank you for sharing about your own experiences here. Good job! Keep up the good work. Please review my corrections below. Ciao! ~Teacher Marie~ I prefer to eat home-made food at anywhere. >> I prefer to eat homemade food anywhere.I\'m eating twice per day at the restaurants, so I bored to eating that food. >> I eat at a restaurant twice a day so I\'m bored of eating that kind of food.As you know, foods at the restaurants have a lot of relish. >> CORRECT! >> foodMany kind of relish have a negative effect on our health. >> CORRECT! >> kindsNowadays, I have a lunch box made from home once per day. >> CORRECT! OR >> Nowadays, I bring a homemade lunch box to work.It is really good to me. >> It is really good for me.My favorite home-made food is kimchi soup with sausage made by my mother. >> CORRECT! >> homemade