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Nowadays, many people doesn't know who live next to my home in Korea. This is terrible problem. Sometimes, I saw a sad news in the news that old person died alone in his room and he was found after a few days. Many people don't care to other people. If I meet the neighbors in elevator of our apartment, I say hello. And so, they really like and have a smile. Surely, excessive interest to neighbors is not good for each other. However, I think we have to say hello with smile when we meet the neighbors.

Hello [이름]! I\'ve read that news about the old man dying in his apartment and nobody knew about it until after a few days! That was just horrible! I couldn\'t believe how apathetic some people are. I used to live by myself so I tried to get to know my neighbors, in case of emergency. However, I\'ve encountered some noisy, annoying, inconsiderate and rude neighbors before. So I didn\'t bother knowing my neighbors or even saying hello to them. Once again, thank you for sharing your thoughts on this. I enjoyed reading your composition. Keep up the good work! Please review my corrections below. Ciao! ~Teacher Marie~ Nowadays, many people doesn\'t know who live next to my home in Korea. >> Nowadays, in Korea, many people don\'t know who live next to them. This is terrible problem. >> This is a terrible problem.Sometimes, I saw a sad news in the news that old person died alone in his room and he was found after a few days. >> Once, I saw a sad news about an old person who died alone in his room and he was only found after a few days. Many people don\'t care to other people. >> Many people don\'t care about other people. If I meet the neighbors in elevator of our apartment, I say hello. >> When I meet my neighbors in the apartment elevator, I say \'hello\' to them.And so, they really like and have a smile. >> They really liked that and they smiled at me.Surely, excessive interest to neighbors is not good for each other. >> Of course, too much interest in our neighbors is also not good. However, I think we have to say hello with smile when we meet the neighbors. >> However, I think we have to at least say hello and smile whenever we meet them.