[[이름] essay]
학생이 쓴 원문
1. Hit the books
- before a day for the test, I chit the book in library all night.
- I really didn't like hit the book for history subject when I was high school student.
2. Hit the sack
- I'm going to hit the sack right now.
- I have to hit the sack early tonight, because I was tired so much.
3. Twist someone's arm
- the staff twisted my arm to buy the unbeautiful shoes.
- I'll go to the department store with you, if you twist my arm.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! Thank you for doing your best in this homework. I can tell that you are familiar with the idioms, however, we still have to work on how you use them in your own sentences. Please take note of extreme adjectives (exhausted, freezing, boiling). Learn how to use them instead of saying \"so much\", \"very very\" or \"really really\". Good luck!
Please review my corrections below.
Ciao!
~Teacher Marie~
1. Hit the books- before a day for the test, I chit the book in library all night.
>> A day before the test, I hit the books all night at the library.- I really didn\'t like hit the book for history subject when I was high school student.
>> I really didn\'t like hitting the books, especially for our history subject, when I was in high school.2. Hit the sack- I\'m going to hit the sack right now.
>> CORRECT!- I have to hit the sack early tonight, because I was tired so much.
>> CORRECT!
>> because I was tired so much = because I was very tired, because I was exhausted3. Twist someone\'s arm- the staff twisted my arm to buy the unbeautiful shoes.
>> CORRECT!
>> ugly, unattractive- I\'ll go to the department store with you, if you twist my arm.
>> CORRECT!
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