[[이름]_essay]At what point in your life can you say that the English language is most useful?
학생이 쓴 원문
I often write the paper and e-mail to foreign people in English.
So, English is useful for me.
Although I can talk about something in mother tongue, if I can not talk in English, foreign people regard I don't know that.
Language is become necessary for people in this day.
So, many people are studying other language not mother tongue.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!^^
It is great that you have a way to use the English that you acquire.
Every chance that you get is a learning possibility. So even
if it is difficult, go fo the goal all the time!^^
Take care!^^
T.Debby^^
Here are my corrections for you today:
I often write the paper and e-mail to foreign people in English.
>> I often write papers and e-mails in English to foreign people/ foreigners. So, English is useful for me.
>> CORRECT
OR> So English is important for me.Although I can talk about something in mother tongue, if I can not talk in English, foreign people regard I don\'t know that.
>> Although I can talk about something in my mother tongue, if I can\'t talk in English, foreigners would regard that I don\'t know that.Language is become necessary for people in this day.
>> Language has become a necessary for people to this day.So, many people are studying other language not mother tongue.
>> So, many people are studying other languages and not their mother tongues.
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