[[이름]_essay]Do you agree that safety is more important than privacy for celebrities?

I don't agree with that. Celebrities is also common people and has a rights for privacy like us. Of course they are people that can strongly affect in the society or public. Therfore, I agree with that they need more careful about their saying and doing. However, We have to respect for their private life. The excessive interest over their privacy is not need to them. even if that is for their safety.

Hi there [이름]!^^ How difficultit is to be popular right? I would always choose a simple life that I have. I do think that repect for one another is very important since it makes us see things differently with other people. They are celebrities for a reason but that also means that they have a life of their own!^^ Take care!^^ T. Debby^^ Here are my corrections for you today: I don\'t agree with that. >> CORRECT OR> I disagree with that.Celebrities is also common people and has a rights for privacy like us. >> Celebrities are also common people and has a right for privacy like us.Of course they are people that can strongly affect in the society or public. >> Of course they are people that can strongly affect the society or the public.Therfore, I agree with that they need more careful about their saying and doing. >> Therfore, I agree with that they need to be more careful about their words and actions.However, We have to respect for their private life. >> However, We have to respect their private life.The excessive interest over their privacy is not need to them. even if that is for their safety. >> They do not need excessive interest over their privacy even if that is for their safety.