[[이름]_essay]Do you change your mood with MUSIC?

I can't play dance very well. So, I don't change my mood wkth music. I actually envy some people which can change their mood to sexy or candid with music in the music club. Specially foreign people can play dance easily than Korean. I don't know why exactly. But, I think this is a cause that Koreans are teached that don't shake body and well-behaved in front of the adults from the child.

Hi there [이름]!^^ I think foreigners are more outgoing so they are get more chances to experience dancing and stuff. Music is a big influence in every culture. Have a great day ahead!^^ T.Debby^^ Here are my corrections for you today: I can\'t play dance very well. >> I can\'t dance very well.So, I don\'t change my mood wkth music. >> So, I don\'t change my mood with music.I actually envy some people which can change their mood to sexy or candid with music in the music club. >> CORRECT OR> I am envious of people who can change their mood easily in a music club.Specially foreign people can play dance easily than Korean. >> Specially foreign people can play dance easily than Koreans.I don\'t know why exactly. >> CORRECT OR> I don\'t exactly know why.But, I think this is a cause that Koreans are teached that don\'t shake body and well-behaved in front of the adults from the child. adults from the child. >> But, I think this is a cause of Koreans are taught that they shouldn\'t shake their bodies and must be well-behaved in front of the adults from their childhood.