[[이름]_essay]Do you think betting on sports should be illegal?

I think that beeting on sports is illegal in the large group. There are kroean style pocker game in Korea. That isn't illegal. However, If people are put money on the game, that game is illegal at law. Although betting on the sports can be fun or released the stress for the people, sometimes that can be take away their everything like money or family or friends.

Hi there Yerim!^^ Do you play friendly games that has a little amouint of money as a bet? Sometimes it\'s fun between just friends but not as far as risking a lot of money. T.Debby^^ Here are my corrections for you today: I think that beeting on sports is illegal in the large group. >> I think that betting on sports is illegal in a large group.There are kroean style pocker game in Korea. >> There are kroean style poker games in Korea.That isn\'t illegal. >> CORRECT Or> This is legal.However, If people are put money on the game, that game is illegal at law. >> However, If people put money on the game, that game is illegal by law.Although betting on the sports can be fun or released the stress for the people, sometimes that can be take away their everything like money or family or friends. >> Although betting on the sports can be fun or releases the stress for the people, sometimes that can take away their everything like money or family or friends.