[[이름]_essay]Do you think climate affects the industry of a certain country?

Yes, I do of course. China affects the climate change in the world seriously. So many factories are continuously under construction to preduce energy like electricity. Therefore, the dust and pollutant are coming in korea through see and wind. This is a really serious problem. In the spring, We have to avoid walk outside without a mask.

Hi there [이름]!^^ Climate is something beyond our control but the location of our countries sometimes give us more difficulties. I\'m sure China would like to solve the problem but the solution is unpredictable since it\'s all about nature!^^ Take care all the time [이름]. T.Debby^^ Here are my corrections for you today: Yes, I do of course. >> CORRECT Or> I do agree.China affects the climate change in the world seriously. >> CORRECT OR> China seriously affects the global climate.So many factories are continuously under construction to preduce energy like electricity. >> So many factories are continuously under construction to produce energy like electricity.Therefore, the dust and pollutant are coming in korea through see and wind. >> Therefore, the dust and the pollutants are coming to Korea through the sea and the wind.This is a really serious problem. >> CORRECT OR> I think of this as a very serious problem.In the spring, We have to avoid walk outside without a mask. >> In the spring, we have to avoid walking outside without a mask.