[[이름]_essay]Do you think that technology has a big influence to people? Why?

Technology affects for the people. Nowadays, People is sensitive for the new technology. Technology can make convenient for us. So, We can talking with anyone and anywhere in the video conferencing. Moreover, We can control the electronics inside of home or office in outdoor. However, I can tell you people become feel annoying themselves and lazy. This is a irony in this day.

Hi there [이름]!^^ The part where people get lazy is definitely correct. People nowadays prefer to look at mobile phones than talking or watching TV rather than walking in the park!^^ Keep the ideas flowing!^^ Happy Friday!^^ T.debby^^ Here are my corrections for you today: Technology affects for the people. >> Technology affects the people.Nowadays, People is sensitive for the new technology. >> Nowadays, People are sensitive for the new technology.Technology can make convenient for us. >> Technology can make things convenient for us.So, We can talking with anyone and anywhere in the video conferencing. >> So, We can talk with anyone and anywhere in video conferencing.Moreover, We can control the electronics inside of home or office in outdoor. >> Moreover, we can control the electronics inside of our home or office outdoors. However, I can tell you people become feel annoying themselves and lazy. >> However, I can tell you people become annoying and they get lazy.This is a irony in this day. >> This is an irony to this day. OR> It\'s ironic this days.